– need a clear thesis at the end of the first paragraph. first sentence at the b

– need a clear thesis at the end of the first paragraph. first sentence at the bottom of your third page would make a good thesis statement. It is VERY important that i have a clear thesis at the end of the introduction. – Begin the conclusion by restating your thesis statement. – fix grammar, structure & flow, please refine writing (if needed) – need to add 1-2 more research and analysis
Requirements: revision

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